Comments on: http://afterdinnerpayback.wordpress.com/2007/03/20/233/ Sat, 13 Dec 2008 18:35:39 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Lesley http://afterdinnerpayback.wordpress.com/2007/03/20/233/#comment-507 Lesley Thu, 22 Mar 2007 13:15:17 +0000 http://afterdinnerpayback.wordpress.com/2007/03/20/233/#comment-507 Oh, that was funny - in more ways than one. Oh, that was funny – in more ways than one.

]]> By: Brandon http://afterdinnerpayback.wordpress.com/2007/03/20/233/#comment-503 Brandon Thu, 22 Mar 2007 01:06:34 +0000 http://afterdinnerpayback.wordpress.com/2007/03/20/233/#comment-503 Simon: That's funny. I felt the same way--I was bored wth all of Nerve's selections. I had to read the above scene twice before finally figuring out what was going on, but after I did, I couldn't help but laugh. Andi: I agree, the writing is awful, which makes me wonder if the entire book is written like that. In any case, the sample isn't enough to get me aroused, much less interested in the book itself. Simon: That’s funny. I felt the same way–I was bored wth all of Nerve’s selections. I had to read the above scene twice before finally figuring out what was going on, but after I did, I couldn’t help but laugh.

Andi: I agree, the writing is awful, which makes me wonder if the entire book is written like that. In any case, the sample isn’t enough to get me aroused, much less interested in the book itself.

]]> By: Andi http://afterdinnerpayback.wordpress.com/2007/03/20/233/#comment-502 Andi Wed, 21 Mar 2007 17:37:23 +0000 http://afterdinnerpayback.wordpress.com/2007/03/20/233/#comment-502 *yawn* Despite the overarching weirdness, the stilted writing is enough to drive anyone over a cliff. Good giggle. Thanks for sharing! *yawn*

Despite the overarching weirdness, the stilted writing is enough to drive anyone over a cliff.

Good giggle. Thanks for sharing!

]]> By: simon http://afterdinnerpayback.wordpress.com/2007/03/20/233/#comment-500 simon Wed, 21 Mar 2007 15:15:45 +0000 http://afterdinnerpayback.wordpress.com/2007/03/20/233/#comment-500 "Soil so dry it can't accept the gift of rain..." you get an erection reading it but not from arousal but boredom “Soil so dry it can’t accept the gift of rain…” you get an erection reading it but not from arousal but boredom

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